Great rendition.

This rendition is really good. You masterfully took the original song and made it into a rock song. I don't have much to say about this rendition, so keep up the great work. 9/10, 5/5.

This song would go well with a fight scene.

The song's great, but it doesn't seem like a victory song, but more of a song that gets you pumped up. But this is still a good thing. The mix is a bit flat, but I can handle it. Anyway, this song makes me feel like taking a jog. Great job with the song. 9/10, 5/5.

Could go very well with an epic flash game.

As people have said before, you have a great imagination. Also, when you produce your songs, try not to make the instruments much louder, or else they will start clipping and might distract the listener. reverb can make the song sound cooler or even louder and distracting depending on how you use it. I don't think any instrument should get louder or softer in the mix because if you make an instrument softer, it will lose its overall "punch". Anyway, the feel of the song is what you intended it to be, and you did a great job with it. 9/10, 5/5.